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A Recipe For Disaster. by ~typically-insane:icontypically-insane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Grab a soul that’s empty,
With nothing else to lose.
Make sure you cause it pain,
With every word and bruise.

Add a guy who breaks her heart,
Mix it all around.
Blend in some destruction,
And burn it to the ground.

Sprinkle a bit of deceit,
A pinch of worthless lies.
A cup of nights of yelling,
And wait for it to rise.

Throw on a rage filled mind,
Check to see it’s done.
A recipe for disaster,
Repeat all steps for fun.
©2009 ~typically-insane
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Author's Comments

i had this random idea,
and it sorta worked :)
tell me what you think ?

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~WoWGirl13 Jul 29, 2009, 7:50:09 PM
Omg! That's is awsome! lol its fun to say and it's kinda funny :P
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~typically-insane Jul 29, 2009, 7:54:53 PM
ahh, funny?
okay, thats.. different.
thankyou.
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~WoWGirl13 Jul 29, 2009, 8:07:54 PM
i didnt mean funny but ah XD im horible at explaining things sry! XD
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~ElegantFaith Jul 30, 2009, 7:35:25 AM
You know, I really really really like the first line. It's really poetic, in a lot of ways. :D

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=SATTISH Jul 30, 2009, 1:02:24 PM
add a few rotten frogs and it will taste just like my cooking :giggle:

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Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man ? - Tao
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~typically-insane Jul 30, 2009, 6:05:32 PM
hahaha !
no secrets herbs and spices?

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~typically-insane Jul 30, 2009, 6:08:29 PM
thank you thank you :)

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~xilamne Jul 31, 2009, 2:22:44 AM
Very well done, I enjoyed it thoroughly ^_^

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Eagles May Soar, But Weasles Don't Get Sucked Into Jet Engines
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~typically-insane Jul 31, 2009, 2:55:02 AM
thank you >.>

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click here, [link] - it'll be the worst thing for your self esteem.
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