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here we go again. by ~typically-insane:icontypically-insane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I’m searching for something that was never lost,
I’m paying for it, when it has no cost.
I’m crying over it, without shedding a tear,
I’m afraid of it, when I have nothing to fear.

I’m loving something that I’ve always hated,
I’m free to roam, though my freedom is wasted.
I’m screaming so loud, yet silence is my friend,
I’ve only recently started, but I’m closer to the end.

I’m planning something that doesn’t have a plot,
I’ve gambled all my life, and I’ve never lost the lot.
I’m hurting deep inside, though I’ll never show the pain.
Another day of confusion, here we go again.
©2009 ~typically-insane
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Author's Comments

I was bored..
Real bored.
And well, no one actually reads my things anymore..
And i'm thinking i'm going to give up poetry soon.
Sorry if anyone actually reads these,
though i doubt it lots.

Comments


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~SirYummyFace Jun 30, 2009, 2:21:10 AM
its great, but yeah, i know what you mean about people reading them, etc :(
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~jessypearce Jun 30, 2009, 2:22:27 AM
you should never give up.... this is the first time i am reading one of your poems and i love it.... it seems to fit with me so well.... but i am going to go read more of your poems now and i just think that you shouldnt give up... cause i wish i had the talent of writing and i enjoy reading other peoples poems, it comforts me, even though i dont comment on them.... it just shows that i know that with your talent and mind, i am not in the world alone and there are people who have feelings just the same as i do, and that they are luckly enough to express it..... dont give up.... have a great day.. jess

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never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!

LLAMAS ARE THE BEST ANIMAL EVER!!!!
:llama:
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~typically-insane Jun 30, 2009, 4:44:47 AM
well thanks, your comment does mean alot to me.
thank you for taking the time to read, and comment.
but as i said, it's like everyone was supportive,
but one bad poem and my watchers just, meh.
oh well.
thanks again,
and i might (highly unlikely) stay on here.
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~hellmonarch Jun 30, 2009, 8:11:06 AM
well even if you were bored i think this is pretty good dont give up on somthing if it makes you happy screw other people if they dont read them then its there los

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"Science may have found a cure for most evils; but it has found no remedy for the worst of them all -- the apathy of human beings."
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*WillSchenck Jun 30, 2009, 9:28:37 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful. I'm at a loss for words, and I'm a bloody writer (;
Bravo :heart:

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I have a tendency to wear my mind on my sleeve.
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~jessypearce Jun 30, 2009, 10:57:23 PM
everyone has there 'bad' poems, songs, paintings all the time,,, and when they tell you about it they are only trying to help, to help you inprove, and make your writing stronger, but i cant stop you, i hope that you stay cause i like your poems,but if you go, go well :D jess

--
never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!

LLAMAS ARE THE BEST ANIMAL EVER!!!!
:llama:
:icontypically-insane:
~typically-insane Jun 30, 2009, 11:11:30 PM
thank you, i wonder why this poem caught so much attention o.0
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~typically-insane Jun 30, 2009, 11:12:03 PM
i suppose,
but couldn't i just write and let them sit and rot in my word gallery?
that'd be just the same.
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